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temper



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PostPosted: Sunday July 16th, 2006 11:40 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

just wrote this, im in abit of a stress..

We all go through hard time but whats hard to mention
Is the fact of not turnin back n enterin redemption
My minds on suspension from sufferin from hatefull acts
But the part that haunts me is the fact of turnin back
Its all black with no light n not a road to guide
I'll tell you the truth now this is how i feel inside
With hands down my side or held behind my back
Hard times theres more to come so i jump the gap
Back the other side, willin to cheat for a collosion
To be on the other side without doin decisions
People dont tell the turth just sugar coat with lies
I'm hid behind words to express my real mind
People can care what they want coz its all gettin old
Tell me theres not a part of you that aint growin cold

Tell me not to go through hard times
Tell me not to suffer from heart rhymes
Tell me what to do, i bet you cant guide
Fuck all these feelins thats fuckin up inside
If you dont like the way i am, thats not my fault
Tell me not to end all this shit with a colt
Its my mind, were all goin through hard times
Tell me not to suffer from heart in my rhymes

Its never too late but is it too late to turn around
Before i end up worthless with nothin but tears on the ground
Next to me sat there a past with a cold
Emotional shit is too much to hold
Express real meanins through rhymes thats what rap is
Expressin how i feel through rhymes thats what gap is
N i remininsce about all the shit i miss n then this
Lookin down at my hands n seein blood on my fists
Gotta put up with hard times no matter were you go
You cant escape em thats why i spit ill flow
N friends are only there until you part your ways
But your real friends know when to go or stay
N stay away some days n not bug you when you pissed
I'm not runnin from beef i just aint got a hit list

Tell me not to go through hard times
Tell me not to suffer from heart rhymes
Tell me what to do, i bet you cant guide
Fuck all these feelins thats fuckin up inside
If you dont like the way i am, thats not my fault
Tell me not to end all this shit with a colt
Its my mind, were all goin through hard times
Tell me not to suffer from heart in my rhymes

Lookin the mirror see my self in 15 years
Thanks everybody takes my songs into there ears
Theres not more i can do but this helps me leave
To a place, were i can rap, sing, write n beleive
That somethings gonna happen, i hope yall got my back
Coz i know deep down i never wanna turn back
Im tryna make a change to stop all this depression
But it just recycles hits back n flips into aggression
Most people think im messin, coz i joke around alot
I only joke around coz im full of distraught
From my heart to the start till the end n the bow
From the claps to the noise till the graff until now
I never thought i'd do this shit, not once in my life
But once again i've been tricked into thinkin twice

Sometimes i get bored like a fish in a tank
Sometimes i get the feelin that this life is just a bag wank
A bag of shit just piled up n made into me
Thats why i act loud n ludacris to cover up shady
It aint me thats made me, but im takin over
N knockin rhymes back like anna kornikova
It helps me alot to hear that yall like me
Coz without yall there really aint Temper you see
You get me through these hard times
N i hope i can get you through yours with my heart rhymes
Coz my heart rhymes with every bar i spit a flow
Coz i shit to show that i can the the realist ya know

Tell me not to go through hard times
Tell me not to suffer from heart rhymes
Tell me what to do, i bet you cant guide
Fuck all these feelins thats fuckin up inside
If you dont like the way i am, thats not my fault
Tell me not to end all this shit with a colt
Its my mind, were all goin through hard times
Tell me not to suffer from heart in my rhymes
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magsteel



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PostPosted: Monday July 17th, 2006 3:02 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Breif background for this song:

My mom and dad divorced when I was 2. Therefore, I've grown up without a dad. I see him twice a year... Christmas and my birthday. Their divorce was because of my dad's alcoholism. And I wrote this song on his birthday.


WISH YOU WERE HERE

Another day of the year
It’s your birthday, I hear
I guess I better wish you a good one

But what I’d really wanna wish
Is to have all those times we missed
You owe me twelve years for this one

Well I wish you were here
Still every day you’re not near
What is it like to have a father?

But I can’t change the past
And these things tend to happen fast
So I guess I won’t even bother

I know it’s not your fault
It’s all that damn alcohol
From what I've heard, that one's your curse

But still I wonder occasionally
If things had turned out differently
Would it be for better or worse?

Either way, I wish you were here
Because at least you’d be near
What is it like to have a father?

But I can’t change the past
I guess it wasn’t meant to last
So I guess I won’t even bother

Dad, I can’t change the past
And these things tend to happen fast
What is it like to know your father?

I know it’s not your fault
I’ve heard you’re off the alcohol
I just wish you were here

Wish you were here
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VWORLDS



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PostPosted: Thursday July 20th, 2006 2:13 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Cool

Cool THANKYOU FOR PLACING YOUR LYRICS TO YOUR SONG HERE MAGSTEEL! A SONG WITH FEELINGS! GOOD JOB MAN!

8)THERES A SAYING IN LIFE!


'"WOT DOESNT BREAK US ONLY MAKES US STRONGER!"

AND YOU HAVE A GOOD STRONG POSITIVE APPROACH TO LIFE SO THATS VERY KWL!

ONE DAY WHEN YOU HAVE CHILDREN AND A WIFE OF YOUR OWN, A GREAT DAD, FATHER N HUSBAND YOU SHALL BE AND HAVE THE LOVE OF YOUR FAMILY WITH YOU!
GOODLUCK IN THE FUTURE WITH YOUR SCHOOLING AND YOUR FUTURE AND YOUR MUSIC!


******************************



Cool THE WINNERS OF THIS WEEKS

LOLLIPOP AWARD SHALL BE ANNOUNCED IN 2 DAYS!

SO IF ANYBODY HAS ANYTHING THEY LIKE TO ADD PLEASE DO SO!

Cool THANKYOU TO EVERYBODY THUS FAR WHO HAS SHARED THEIR THOUGHTS TALENTS AND FELLINGS WITH US!
ITS A HEALTHY THING!

Cool OK ALL TAKE CARE SEE YOU HERE AGAIN SOON!

Cool STAY KWL!

Cool THIS HAS BEEN A VWORLDS UPDATE!

8)VWORLDS


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VWORLDS



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PostPosted: Thursday July 20th, 2006 2:24 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Razz




Cool NEWS FLASH! NEWS FLASH!

NEWS FLASH!!!!!


Arrow REDMAN HAS NEW SUMMA MUSIC CONTEST UP TO ENTER SO GET THAT MUSIC IN FOR THE CONTEST!


Cool AND YES REDMAN IVE ALREADY ENTERED!

Cool KWL BUDDY SHOULD BE FUN!


Cool VWORLDS1





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VWORLDS



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PostPosted: Friday July 21st, 2006 5:28 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Rolling Eyes


OK GUYS HERES HOW IT IS!!!!!


Confused ALL OF THESE PIECES TOUCHED MY EMOTIONS AND MY HEART!


SO THATS MEANS YOU ALL DID VERY WELL COS THEY DONT CALL ME IRON MAIDEN FOR NOTHING! HAHAHA!

Cool ANYWAY AFTER GIVING IT SOME THOUGHT AND BECAUSE THE ARE ALL SO VERY DIFFERENT!

I DECIDED ITS ONLY FAIR TO GIVE YOU ALL OF YOU THE LOLLIPOP AWARD!"" ITS A 3 WAY TIE!

Cool SO THE WINNERS ARE:


Cool REDMAN

Cool TEMPER

Cool MAGSTEEL "


Cool BE KWL TO HEAR ALL OF THESE LYRICS WHEN YOU GUYS RECORD THEM!


Cool THANKYOU FOR BEING A PART OF THE HLOUNGE ONLINE COMUNITY AND GETTING INVOLVED! THATS KWL AND SHOWS INITIVE AND DILEGENCE AND PROGRESS!


Cool CAN SEE YOU GUYS ARE SERIOUSE ABOUT MUSIC! THATS JUST THE BEST!


Cool SO CONGRADULATIONS TO YOU ALL!

Cool VWORLDS1






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temper



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PostPosted: Saturday July 22nd, 2006 4:12 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

aww cheers vworlds Very Happy ive recorded crossroads but ive changed it abit for my mate that died, he loved the lyrics when i sent them to him so ive changed it abit n recorded it for him..listen to it and tell me what ya think please Smile R.I.P Liam x
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tha big wiggle



Joined: April 15, 2006
Posts: 13

PostPosted: Saturday July 22nd, 2006 10:29 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Its the W I GG L E
Im tha big wiggle u dont wanna fuck wit me
Call me a dumb drunk red neck bastard and ill call you by yo name (yes massa)
i dont give a fuck if u think i can rap
just know i will hit a bitch in her trap
u aint gotta hate cause i gotta nice house
thats right i aint stuck living hand ta mouth
thats how i do it swimmin pool in tha back yard
on my motorcycle ridin in tha front yard
if you pay more than 2.83 for a gallon of gas
come down here and ill kick you in the ass
dont think my fat ass wont get crazy
ill sabu yo ass through a table fo being fuckin lazy
i may weigh over three hundred pounds
but ill back flip off tha house through a table straight to tha ground.
the moral of the story is very simple ya see
im the big muthafuckin wigle and you better not fuck with ME!!!!!!!!
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VWORLDS



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Posts: 324

PostPosted: Sunday July 23rd, 2006 1:40 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Cool



Cool YOLE WIGGLES YOU FUNNY SOMETIMES SOME GOOD BITS IN THA MAN!


Cool HOWS YOU BEEN AND THANKS FOR STOPPING THIS WAY TO LET ME KNOW YOUR ALIVE N OK!



Cool TAKE CARE MATE !Smile


8)VWORLDS1


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VWORLDS



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PostPosted: Sunday July 23rd, 2006 10:32 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Razz


Cool NEWS FLASH!!!!!!



Rolling Eyes JUST 7 DAYS TO GO!



Arrow DONT FORGET TO ADD YOUR NEW PIECES HERE THIS WEEK FOR THE LOLIPOP AWARD OR JUST TO SAY HI!


Cool THERES PLENTY OF CONTESTS AND COMPS ON RIGHT NOW FOLKS SO GET INVOLVED AND BE A PART OF THE HLOUNGE COMMUNITY!



Cool PS IF ANYONE HAS ANY GOOD IDEAS THEY LIKE TO SEE ADDED TO THE COMMUNITY /SOCIAL COMUNITY OF HLOUNGE THEN LETS HEAR IT RIGHT HERE! Smile



Cool TAKECARE EVERYBODY SEE YOU ALL AROUND SOON!Smile






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VWORLDS



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PostPosted: Monday July 24th, 2006 10:50 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Cool


Razz NEWS FLASH!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Cool JUST 6 DAYS TO GO!!!!!


Arrow YEP THE BIG DRAW IN
JUST 6
DAYS!!!!!!


Wink SO GET THEM
ENTRIES IN!





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VWORLDS



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PostPosted: Tuesday July 25th, 2006 11:51 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Rolling Eyes



Rolling Eyes ok its just a thought at the moment!

Arrow WE HAVE DECIDED THAT ANOTHER CONTEST MITE BE THE GO!


HAHAHAHAHAHAH!

Cool OK HES WOT IM THINKING!

Rolling Eyes 1. AN MP3 CONTEST!

2. RAP/HIPHOP

3. WITH LYRICS

4. EVERYBODY HAS TO USE THE LYRICS I PROVIDE AS THE LYRICS TO THE SONG!

5. BUT YOU CAN RAP IT YOUR OWN STYLE OF VOICE AND MAKE YOUR OWN BEATS/MUSIC TO THE LYRICS!

Cool IF YOUR INTERESTED IN GIVING THIS A TRY THEN LIST YOUR NAME HERE BY SAYING YES I WANT TO ENTER ! THEN I SHALL DECIDE IF THERES ENOUGH PERSONS TO ENTER AND RUN A CONTEST!

OK WELL THATS THE IDEA!


Cool VWORLDS1


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Dell



Joined: April 27, 2006
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PostPosted: Tuesday July 25th, 2006 1:25 pm    Post subject: Meh Poem! :D Reply with quote

"Sucide For You"

No one understands,
No one hears my plea.
I know your gone but in my heart
I know that we were meant to be.
I never thought I'd die so soon.
I seemed so happy.
How could any one have known?
Tomorrow holds nothing but darkness and pain.
The sky is always dark.
It starts to rain.
I take the knife in my left hand,
This is what the fates demand.
I don't know how to let you go,
How do you say goodbye?
How do you watch your soulmate walk away?
I wish I could make you turn around and see me cry.
I wish I could make you turn around and watch me die.
I need to realize that now your gone.
I should know your never coming back.
Why did you go away?
I would have done anything to make you stay!
I slit my wrist,
I hit the floor,
I know it's over,
I close the door.
Thers no one here to hear my scream,
Thers no one here to end this dream.
I am all alone and I don't even care,
I tried to look for hope... but the world was bare.
I lie here and die.
It'll all be over soon.
There's nothing anyone could have done.
I say good-bye to the only one.
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VWORLDS



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PostPosted: Wednesday July 26th, 2006 8:36 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Crying or Very sad



I HAVE LIVED MY LIFE, IN LOVE AND HATE !

AND SLIT MY WRISTS, IN ANTISIPATE!

IVE LET MY HEART BLEED, SHRIVEL AND DIE!

STOOD OUT MY BODY AND WHATCHED MY SOUL CRY!

IVE WORN THE PAIN AND SUFFER OF OTHERS, WHILE THEY JOLLY, THE FKN MOTHERS!

AND ALTHOUGH THERE IS MUCH MORE HELD IN MY STORE, TO POUR IT ALL OUT, WELL. THATS NOT MY CALL!

BUT I TELL YOU THIS MUCH, LIFE CAN BE A PRINCESS OR WHORE!
PROVIDING YOU WITH GIFTS OR TAKING IT ALL!

THROUGH ALL LIFES HATES AND ALL LIFES PAIN, STAY CLOSE TO GOD, TO KEEP YOUR MIND SAIN!

FOR I HAVE LEARNED, VIA A HARD TRACK, THAT SLITTING YOUR WRISTS, AINT THE SAVIOURS STACK!

LOVE CAN BE PAINFULL AND SICK!WITH THE INCARSERATION OF IT, UNFAITHFUL TO YOUR HEALTH AND MIND MAKING YOU ILL, FEELING DENIED!

BUT IM SURE GOD HAS CHOSEN A RIGHT REASON IN TIME!
AS YOU MEND AND THUS YOU WILL, YOU SHALL SEE THE PURPOSE AND REASON THAT WAS, PREVIOUSLY INSTILLED!

AS WE WALK N RIDE A PATH THROUGHOUT OUR LIVES,THE TWISTS AND TURNS THAT OUR FUTURE TAKES, ITS NOT ALWAYS OF SENSE WE MAKE!
LIKE THE WAVES OF THE OCEAN! LIFE IS NOT ALWAYS A SMOOTH WAVE! AND THE UNDERTOW CAN BE ROUGH!
LEARN TO RIDE OUT THE STORMS AND WAVES!
USE GODS STRENGTH, IT HELPS N SAVES!
THERE IS ALWAYS A BETTER WAVE, VERY CLOSE BY!
MAYBE TOMOROW, OR MAYBE TODAY!
SO DONT GIVE UP!
DONT DIE!
DONT SLAY!
FOR HELP, IS CLOSE AND ON THE WAY!

I ONCE LOVED SOMEONE WITH ALL MY MIGHT!
I LOVED HIM DAY AND I LOVED HIM NIGHT!
NEVER RECIPERCATED THOUGH ALWAYS AN
ENDLESS PLIGHT!
I BEGGED AND PLEEDED WITH GOD TO MAKE IT MY WAY,MAKE IT RIGHT!
BUT NO!
IT WAS NEVER MENT TO BE!
AND NOW THE WORST PART IS,
I FEEL REALLY, REALLY, SILLY!
COS, IN ALL MY WANTING AND ALL MY PLIGHT!
I NEARLY SOLD MY SOUL, TO THE WRONG ENTITY, RIGHT!
BUT I GAVE GOD ONE MORE CHANCE TO TRY, BEFORE I GAVE UP, FOR A THAT, HAVEN DIE!

""SHOW ME WHY THIS SHOULD NOT BE ?"

AND VERY SOON, GOD DID!
HE ANSWERED ME!
BY SHOWING ME, THAT THE ONE I ADORED, AND LOVED SO PASSIONATELY!
WAS NOTHING BUT, A FKN HERION NO GOOD JUNKIE!
IT WAS ONLY THEN!
THAT I KNEW FOR SURE!
THAT GOD, HAD REALLY PROTECTED ME AND KEPT MY, BEST INTREST IN STORE!
SAVING MY SOUL AND MY LIFE TOO!
SO HERE I AM NOW , WITH THE ANSWER TO YOU!

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VWORLDS



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PostPosted: Thursday July 27th, 2006 12:46 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Razz




Razz ONLY 4 DAYS TO GO UNTO THE BIG DRAW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Devils Dog



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PostPosted: Thursday July 27th, 2006 7:00 am    Post subject: DOGMAN DM Reply with quote

THE WORLD, FULL OF MYSTERIES, WAR, DEATH AND EVEN WONDERS.


THE YEAR 2549 A NEW SPACE STATION WAS LAUNCHED INTO SPACE BUT WAS THEN TAKEN OVER BY WHO I LIKE TO CALL…... M@D MOUSE.
HE STOLE THE STATION 1 YEAR AFTER THE TAKE OFF,
THE STATION WAS WORTH $1000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000.THAT’S NOT MUCH FOR…... M@D MOUSE,HE WANTS IT FOR DOMINATION OVER THE EARTH,HE WANTS US AS SLAVES.

WHY ARE WE NOT SLAVES, I’LL TELL YOU WHY,

BECAUSE OF ME

I AM DOGMAN, HOW I BEGAN IS CONFIDENTIAL. AFTER THIS INFORMATION THE STORY WILL BEGIN.

DOGMAN, AS A TRAMP, WENT TO A DUSTBIN AND FOUND A NEWSPAPER AND IT SAID ON IT, “TOP STORY, SPACE STATION ABANDED. NO-ONE BRAVE TO GO UP AND CHECK FOR THE CAUSE,” DOGMAN THOUGHT, “HEY, I COULD VOLENTEER TO GO UP
TO SPACE, MAYBE THEY WON’T ACCEPT ME. IT’S WORTH A TRY, I’LL BE A HERO, FROM NOW AND ALWAYS, EVEN IF I’M HATED I WON’T GIVE UP PROTECTING THE INNOCENT. I’LL NOW BE KNOWN AS
DOGMAN

LATER AT……………..ER…………WELL SOME SPACE STATION PROBABLY N.A.S.A. DOGMAN ASKED, “EXCUSE ME.” INTERUPPTED BY THE SECUTARY “AGHHAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” DOGMAN SPOKE AGAIN “SORRY, DID I SCARE YOU, I’D LIKE TO INVESTIGATE THAT SPACE STATION.” “OH” REPLIED THE SECUTARY, “GO ON IN.” DOGMAN WENT ON AND FOLLOWED THE SIGNS.
LATER AT THE BOSS’S OFFICE DOGMAN HAD A CONVERSATION………...
“YOU’RE A MUTANT” SO DOGMAN REPLIED, “THAT’S PRETTY MUCH TRUE.” THE BOSS SAID, “O.K. YOU’RE IN, NOW GO, SHOOO.”
DOGMAN GOT HIS PERMISSION AND SOONER GOT HIS TRAINING, BEST PART WAS HE GOT A SUPER-HERO
COSTUME AND THEN BEGAN HIS MISSION………………

DOGMAN WAS EXCITED YET WORRIED; HE HAD NO THOUGHTS OF THE FUTURE, JUST DEATH. DOGMAN AND THE HIGHLY SKILLED ASTRONAUT JAMES P. CONNORS WAITED FOR COUNTDOWN, “5, 4, 3, 2, 1, WE HAVE LIFT OFF.” DOGMAN REMEMBERED, “I HAVE TICKS!!!!!!!!!!” DOGMAN WENT CRAZY, TRYING TO GET RID OF HIS TICKS AND PING! HE REMEMBERED THE BUTTON ON HIS BELT, THE SUPER, SUPER, SUPER TICK-KILLER WITH BUILT-IN SOUPA SOUP DISPENSER. HE PRESSED IT AND KILLED HIS TICKS AND ALSO GOT SOME TOMATO SOUP.DOGMAN ASKED, “WHICH SPACE STATION ARE WE GOING TO, THAT ONE OR THAT ONE OVER THERE.” JAMES REPLIED, “I DON’T KNOW, O.K. I WILL GO TO THE ONE ON THE RIGHT, AND YOU GO TO THE ONE ON THE LEFT.””BUT I WANT TO GO TO THE ONE ON THE RIGHT,” DOGMAN SAID.

DOGMAN AND JAMES HAD DECIDED, “DOGMAN, YOU ARE GOING TO THE RIGHT AND I WILL GO TO THE LEFT, O.K.” JAMES WENT INTO THE ONE-MAN AIRCRAFT AND SET OFF TO THE SPACE STATION ON THE LEFT, “BYEE.” DOGMAN SAID, WHEN HE BLINKED JAMES WAS BLOWN UP,
“AH WELL, AT LEAST THAT WASN’T ME.” DOGMAN WENT OVER TO THE SPACE STATION ON THE RIGHT; HE KNEW IT WAS THE REAL ONE BECAUSE HE FOUND OUT THE OTHER ONE WAS MADE OUT OF PAPER.
DOGMAN THEN ENTERED THE BEGINNING OF THE OF THE TRAIL. M@D MOUSE HAD AWAKENED. “DOGMAN, FINALLY, YOU HAVE COME, I HAVE BEEN WAITING FOR YOU FOR FIVE YEARS,”
“BUT THIS HAS ONLY STARTED A YEAR AGO,”“YES, THAT IS WHERE A CONNECTION COMES IN, YOU SEE, YOUR OWNER TRIED TO STOP MY EVIL PLANS FIVE YEARS AGO, BUT HOW I FOUND OUT ABOUT YOU, I FOUND MUTANT DOG DNA ON HIM AND I ASKED ABOUT, HE THEN TOLD ME AND I THEN BLASTED HIM TO KINGDOM COME.”
“NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!”
DOGMAN SAID.
“WHY DID YOU SAY THAT?” MOUSE REPLIED, SO DOGMAN SAID
“DUNNO.”
“OK, LET’S JUST GET ON WITH THE FIGHT. DOGMAN AND M@D MOUSE FOUGHT AND FOUGHT AND JUST REPEAT “AND FOUGHT” 30 TIMES TO YOURSELF.
DOGMAN LAUGHED, “HEE HEE HEE, YOUR BEING CHOPPED UP.”
“WHAT,” HE LOOKED DOWN, WHILE DOGMAN ESCAPED, HE WAS BEING CHOPPED UP, “I AM BEING CHOPPED UP, NOW I’M BEING BLOWN UP.”
WHEN DOGMAN ESCAPED… KABOOM!!!!!!!!!! DOGMAN SAVED A LOT OF LIVES…YAY Very Happy


THAT IS A STORY I WROTE WHEN I WAS TEN, IT WAS CALLED DOGMAN DM Smile YAY HAHAHAHA WELL...ENJOY.

AND HERE'S A PIC OF DOGMAN


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VWORLDS



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PostPosted: Friday July 28th, 2006 3:51 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Cool


Cool VERY GOOD DEVIL YOU GOT GREAT IMAGINATION N THATS A VERY GOOD THING TO HAVE IN BEING CREATIVE!


Cool LOOK FORWARD TO READING YOUR NEXT CHAPTER HERE!


Cool KWL BUDDY! GOOD JOB DEVIL DOG AND WHERES YOU PICTURE OF YOUR SUPER HERO WHY DONT YOU ADD HIM HERE THEN EVERYBODY KNOW HIM LIKE I DID!


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Deathsduet



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PostPosted: Friday July 28th, 2006 4:15 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Novicane

No ones left im here to bleed.
Can't restrain what is underneath.
Nothing left, don't speak, short of breath, don't speak.

My faigh reserves have run dry
Dirty tears some one had to cry
Isolation my world surcomes to devistation
Collective mind numb
Liberation, Bit my tounge?
Speration, Innonence from scum

I can feel your fingers on my neck
Touching me, changing me
Never indirect
Time to snap
Attack, React, Get Back, Retract, Ripped snapped
Don't hold back

Can you feel the pain?
I need the novicane
Overpowered like a hurricane
Don't speak

My trust has run dry don't speak
All those tears I never meant for you to cry Don't speak
Isolation my world surcomes to devistation
This is what you call free?
Liberation preident please be my enemy
Seperation made for you to pity me
Isolation this is how it is supposed to be

13 ounces of cyanide
6 more counts of suicide
Deceived justice has died
A new victim to genocide
I believe diplomacy died
Fractions now neutralized
and a "truth" put into american eyes
Can you feel the pain?
I need the novicane
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VWORLDS



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PostPosted: Friday July 28th, 2006 7:13 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Cool


Cool WOW SOME PRETTY STRONG STUFF THERE MAN!

QUITE UP WITH THE MESSAGE! KWL!


Cool THERES SOME VERY KWL N MEANINGFUL STUFF COMING IN EACH WEEK AND THANKYOU TO YOU ALL FOR SHARING YOUR TALENTS AND FEELINGS AND THOUGHTS WITH US! HOPEFULLY YOUR ARE ALL ENJOYING THIS WEEKLY EVENT AND THE CHANCE TO EXPRESS YOURSELVES OR JUST TO HAVE A READ! I THANK EVERYBODY WHO PARTICIPATES AND I DO ENJOY READING YOUR WORKS!

Rolling Eyes THIS WEEKS LOLLIPOP AWARD GOES TO:

DEATHSDUET AND DEVILS DOG!

YOU BOTH HAVE CONTRIBUTED GOOD READING PIECES!

NOW THE HARD PART GUYS IS HOW YOU GOING TO SHARE HALF THE LOLLIPOP EACH!?

NAH1 JUST KIDDING! YOU GET ONE EACH!

AND FOR THE EMOKID DELL AS RUNNER UP! A BOWL OF PENGY FOOD!

ANYWAY GREAT JOB GUYS!

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Deathsduet



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PostPosted: Friday July 28th, 2006 8:12 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

The Right thing

I'm so tired of being weak
So tired of being to shy to speak
It's time to raise my voice
take a stand and make a choice
put my fear in the back of my mind
rip out all of these feelings
and disect what I find
It seems so hard to make amends
when all my beginnings seem like shitty ends.

The right thing
is always the hardest thing to do
because at the dark cold bottom
Theres never anyone there but you

With this tension
the sress always mounts
with your head in control
your heart never counts
that should be said with out emotion
continue to mutilate with no intervention

The right thing
is always the hardest thing to do
because at the dark cold bottom
Theres never anyone there but you

Make a fucking impact.
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PostPosted: Friday July 28th, 2006 8:25 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Shocked

Cool NICE FLOW AND CONFIGUREATION! ALSO A GOOD MSSAGE BUT TIP NEVE LET YOUR HEART GO COMPLEATLY COLD! TRY A PIFTY PIFTY ! USUALLY WORKS!

KWL MAN! IS DEVIL WRITTING HIS NEXT CHAPTER!
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