My First Poem-Tears Of The Sky

 
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What Should I Do?
Stick With Rap
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Both-I have Talnt at Both
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Xodus



Joined: May 13, 2006
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PostPosted: Thursday October 26th, 2006 2:03 pm    Post subject: My First Poem-Tears Of The Sky Reply with quote

TEARS OF THE SKY

Tears Of The Sky,
Lord give me a sign as i wait to die,
and when i go please let me fly,
look up as it is time it go,
what comes down to save me?
TEARS OF THE SKY

Now I Know I Have Not Listened Father,
And I Have Strayed From Your House,
Although I Have Not been In, I Was never out,
Life Gets Tough-Sometimes I Wanna Cry,
But What Always Saves Me?
TEARS OF THE SKY

10 Years Later I Look Back On It,
How Disobedient i was,
I Used To Crack On It,
like..Yo I Aint Goin Bak To Church,
But In The End I Was The One Who Was Hurt,
Glad To Be Saved From A Hard Time, Why?
TEARS OF THE SKY

Chris M Apple

Copyright ©2006 Chris M Apple
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DNOTE



Joined: June 20, 2006
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PostPosted: Thursday October 26th, 2006 2:25 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

that is the worst piece of....

nah it was really good. stick with both poem and rap.
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