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VWORLDS
Joined: April 14, 2006 Posts: 324
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Posted: Wednesday June 28th, 2006 5:02 am Post subject: WOTS KWL? WHOS KWL? AND MORE! TOP LYRICS/POEMS/CONTESTS ETC |
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MOVING ON INTO A NEW LIVING WORLD OF A NEW
ADVENTURES BUT IF YOU WANT TO CONTACT ME YOU
KNOW EHRE TO FIND ME.
AVITA
I NEVER LEFT YOU:)
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VWORLDS
Joined: April 14, 2006 Posts: 324
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Posted: Wednesday June 28th, 2006 1:31 pm Post subject: |
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REMEMBER GET THOSE ENTRIES IN BY THIS FRIDAY THE 30TH JUNE!
OK ALL THE ENTRENTS R IN FOR THE CONTEST AND THE CONTEST IS OFFICALLY CLOSED TO ANY FURTHER ENTRENTS!
SO NOW ALL YOU GUYS IN REMEMBER CORRECT TILE AND YOU HAVE TO:
THE 7TH OF JULY
TO HAND IN YOUR MUSIC ENTRY!
GOODLUCK EVERYBODY WHO IS ENTERED YOUR THE KWLEST GUYS ON THE PLANET!
8)VWORLDS1
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VWORLDS
Joined: April 14, 2006 Posts: 324
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Posted: Friday June 30th, 2006 8:11 pm Post subject: ONE OF MY RAP POEMS |
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A BIT OF AUSSY HUMOR!!!!!
FOR ALL THEM RAPPERS!
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I COULD DROP YOU LIKE, A TIMBUCKTOO!
SCRAPE YOU OFF, THA SOLE OF ME SHOE!
SKIN YAR ALIVE, LIKE A KANGAROO!
OR PUT YAR IN A CAGE, WIV ME COCKATOO!
SO WOT YAH GONNA SAY?
AND WOT YAH GUNNA DO?
COME ON HERE, N TAKE A LOOK AT ME
MATE. HES, A TWELVE GAGE!
AND, JUST LIKE BRAND NEW!
YEH! COME ON, IN CLOSER, SO GET A BETTER VIEW !
COS HEY, BANG!!!!! HERES ONE BARRAL!
AND HEY. BANG!!!! THERES NUMBER TWO!
GUESS NOW, I HAVE TO FEED YAR TO ME DAM
DOG!
LET ME INTRODUCE YAR TO KELPIE!
HIS NAMES BLUE!
WOTS THAT YOU SAY?
YOUR HUNGRY? YOU WANNA HAVE A CHEW?
NO WORRIES MATE !
MEAT PIE BAKED BEANS N SOME GOOD OLE IRISH STEW!
WE CAN DO IT OVER A BEER!
NAR WORKIN MATE , CUPPA WILL HAVE TA DO!
WOT? YAH NEED THE DUNNY MATE?
WELL THERE IT IS THERE, N WOTCH IT!
COS, HES NAMES LUE!
HEY ! WHERE YOU GOING OFF TO?
COS NAR! NAR NOT YET, WE AINT THROUGH!
GOT SOME MORE LINED UP HERE!
YEH, SURE MATE, A DISHUP, JUST FOR YOU!
HUH? CANT TELL YOU RIGHT NOW!
NUH, NAR, NO WAY! NOT TODAY,NOT TILL A HALF
PAST TWO!
YOU RECKON ITS NOT DINKUM?
WELL, IM TELLIN YARH!
ITS TRUE!
NOW CLEAN THE CAULIEFLOURS OUT YARH
EARS, SO YAR CAN HEAR WOTS COMIN THROUGH!
YOUVE HEARD THIS FIRST HAND, FROM A BLOODY
AUSSY CREW!
VWORLDS1
as this is in jest and in the name of ryme n slang !no offence is intended to any persons or being!
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VWORLDS
Joined: April 14, 2006 Posts: 324
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Posted: Saturday July 1st, 2006 2:19 pm Post subject: |
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OH!
SO YOU THINK YOU CAN DO BETTER!!!!!?
COME ON POST IT HERE!
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VWORLDS
Joined: April 14, 2006 Posts: 324
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Posted: Sunday July 2nd, 2006 7:16 am Post subject: |
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NEWS FLASH!!!!!
NEWS FLASH!!!!!
DEVIL DOG HAS COMPETION
ON !PLEASE CHECK COMPETIONS IN THS FORUM AREA!!!!!! |
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Devils Dog
Joined: May 20, 2006 Posts: 80
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Posted: Sunday July 2nd, 2006 8:58 am Post subject: MY POAM |
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POAM THINGY MA BOB A TRONICON SPELTZER
IT WAS ONE FINE DAY,
WHAT SHALL I DO TADAY?
WHAT SHALL I SAY?
WHAT MUST I PAY?
I DUNNO BIG FAT BRAIN,
YOU CAUSE ME SO MUCH PAIN,
MABYE I'LL KICK YOU UP THE LANE,
OR MABYE YOU'LL BE FED 2 A GREAT DANE.
I CAN'T STAND IT,
MY ARM WON'T FIT,
IN MY EAR IT WON'T FIT,
I CAN'T PULL OUT MY BRAIN, NOT EVEN A BIT.
WHY?WHY?WHY?
WHY WON'T MY BRAIN DIE?
I WANNA MAKE BRAIN PIE,
IT WON'T DIE, SIGH...
WAR SHALL COME, DUN DUN DUN,
WAR SHALL RISE, DUN DUN DUN,
WAR SHALL SUCCEED, DUN DUN DUN,
DEATH TO BRAINS, YES THAT'S RIGHT, DEATH TO BRAINS...
NAAA NA NA NA, NAAA NA NA,
NAAA NA NA NA DUN! DUN! DUN!
NAAA NA NA NA, NAAA NA NA, NAAA NA NA NA DUN! DUN! DUN!
SOOMEE ONI KACKA MOLIE...
WAR...WAR...WAR...WAR...WAR...
WAR TO BRAINS,
NAAA NA NA NA, NAAA NA NA, NAAA NA NA NA DUN! DUN! DUN!
NAAA NA NA NA...NAAA NA NA...NAAA NA NA NA DUN! DUN! DUN!
ONE RULE IN WAR...
THE ONLY RULE IN WAR...
KILL ONLY ENEMIES...
NOT YOUR ALLIES...
THE ENEMY IS UR BRAIN...
BY DEVILS DOG. |
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VWORLDS
Joined: April 14, 2006 Posts: 324
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Posted: Sunday July 2nd, 2006 9:23 am Post subject: |
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OK DEVIL DOG YOU GOT YOUR POEM TO POST! BUT DONT FORGET, I STILL THE HOST WITH THE MOST!
NOT BAD YOU LITTLE IRISH FIEND BUT AS OF YET YOU NOT GOT THE LEAD ON THIS KWL NEW SCEAN! SO BE CREATIVE N THINK IT TOO! THEN POST IT HERE SO I CAN AGAIN BEAT YOU!
HAHAHAHA! YES YOU ARE! STLILL MY BUDDY NO MATTER HOW FAR!
VWORLDS1
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VWORLDS
Joined: April 14, 2006 Posts: 324
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Posted: Wednesday July 5th, 2006 11:47 am Post subject: |
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WHATS NOT KWL!
PEOPLE WHO PUT UP OTHER PEOPLES MUSIC AND DONT STATE ITS NOT THEIR OWN!
MP3 REMIXES SUCK!
WHY???????????????????????
BECAUSE WHERES THE TALENT MUSICALLY? JUST TAKING THE BEST PARTS OF SOME OTHER ARTIST OR BANDS POPULAR PIECES AND MIXING THEM ABOUT! I SHOULD PUT MY OLD RECORDS N ALBUMS UP HERE LIKE GUNS N ROSES FOR STARTERS N MIX IT WITH SOME BETTLES N SOME FLEETWOOD MAC OH N SOME EIMEIM!PUT MY NAME TO IT AND GET A TOP RATING COS I PLAYED PIECES U USED TO LISENING TOO!
THERES A COUPLE OF GENIUNE PEOPLES ON HERE THAT HAVE PUT THEIR OWN REAL MUSIC UP ON THE MP3 N DONT EVEN GET THE RECOGNITION FOR THEIR TALENTS NOW THAT SUCKS!
I RECKON IF A MP3 UPLOAD IS I NOT TOTALLY ORIGINAL WORK IT SHOULDNT BE ALLOWED IN TOP TEN,INCLUDING NON ORIGINAL REMIXES!
WELL I JUST HAD TO SAY WHAT EVERYBODY ELSES BEEN SAYING!
8)VWORLDS1
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stevenman1114
Joined: May 31, 2006 Posts: 35
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Posted: Wednesday July 5th, 2006 1:28 pm Post subject: Someone in the Quiet Room is trying to speak! |
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Sure is lonely in the Quiet Room. I want my mommy. |
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VWORLDS
Joined: April 14, 2006 Posts: 324
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Posted: Wednesday July 5th, 2006 11:13 pm Post subject: |
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GOOD ON YOU BOTH, DEVIL DOG AND STEVE! A TEN OUT OF FIVE FOR KEEPING SONGS,LYRICS AND POEMS ALIVE! |
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VWORLDS
Joined: April 14, 2006 Posts: 324
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Posted: Friday July 7th, 2006 4:32 am Post subject: |
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I THINK THIS WEEKS LOLLIPOP AWARD SHALL GO TO DEVILDOG!
CONGRADULATIONS DEVILDOG FOR THE BEST PIECE OF THE WEEK BESIDES ME! HAHAHA!
THANKYOU DEVILDOG!
DONT FORGET A NEW PIECE FOR NEXT WEEK! |
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VWORLDS
Joined: April 14, 2006 Posts: 324
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Posted: Friday July 7th, 2006 8:23 pm Post subject: |
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WELL ITS THE LAST MOMENTS OF THE CONTEST ENTRY DELIVERY TIME WITH LESS THAN AN HOUR TO GO! HAVE YOU GOT ALL YOUR ENTRIES IN ?
THIS HAS BEEN THE BIG MUSIC TALENT CONTEST OF 2006 IN HLOUNGE AND YES WE REALY DO WANT TO HEAR YOUR MUSIC!
SO PLEASE ANYBODY WHO HASNT HANDED IN THEIR MUSIC ENTRY PLEASE DO SO STRAIGHT NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!
THANKYOU KINDLUY EVERYBODY FOR YOUR PARTICIPATION AND FOR TAKING THE TIME TO CARE N BE BOTHERED! |
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VWORLDS
Joined: April 14, 2006 Posts: 324
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Posted: Saturday July 8th, 2006 9:27 pm Post subject: |
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HEY THER AND HI EVERYBODY WHO VISITS HERE ITS NICE TO SEE YOU!
WELL ITS BEEN A BUSY WEEK AND MANY NEW CONTESTS ON SO PLEASE EVERYBODY CHECK AND SEE IF THERE ANY YOU LIKE TO ENTER!
I WOULD LIKE TAKE THIS OPPORTUNITY TO THANK EVERYBODY WHO RATES AND COMMENTS MY MUSIC! I ALSO ENJOY LISTENING TO YOURS!
AS YOU ALL MAY OR MAY NOT KNOW
DEVIL DOG WON THE LOLIPOP AWARD FOR HIS LITTLE POEM LAST WEEK!
MAYBE YOU CAN ADD A LITTLE POEM OR RYME OR LYRICS TO A SONG YOU WROTE HERE TOO! THIS IS JUST A COMMUNITY INTREST THING FOR THE FRIENDS N BUDDIES OF HLOUNGE!
WELL HERES MY LITTLE PIECE FOR THIS WEEK!
ITS BEEN A TOUGH ONE WITH NOT MUCH DONE !
BUT DONT GET ME WRONG IVE HAD A LOT OF FUN!
WITH LARFS A PLENTY AND GIGGLES TOO!
FROM DEVIL DOG, AND OTHERS TRUE!
A SLENDID WEEK ALL IN ALL,
I BE HERE NEXT WEEK FOR MORE!
SO SEE YOU SOON AND DO TAKE CARE, LEAVE A POEM ON HERE TO SHARE!
8)VWORLDS1
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VWORLDS
Joined: April 14, 2006 Posts: 324
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Posted: Friday July 14th, 2006 1:25 am Post subject: OK IM GETTING ANGRY! |
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WHY?
YOU WANT TO KNOW WHY?!
THIS IS WHY!
FOR SEVERAL WEEKS NOW I ASK YOU PEOPLES TO GET
INVOLVED HERE AND NOT ONE OF YOU HAS LEFT A
POEM OR A RYME OR A SONG LYRIC!
WOT YOU THINK IM THE ONLY ONE SHOULD MAKE
AN EFFORT AROUND HERE TO MAKE THIS INTO ONE OF
THE BEST COMMUNITY SITES ON THE NETWORK TO
ENJOY!
NOT 1 HI VWORLDS HOW YOU DOIN?
OR HERE VWORLDS AND HLOUNGE FRIENDS
CHECK OUT MY NEW LITTLE POEM!
OR I HAD A GREAT WEEKEND LET ME SHARE
SOME OF THE HIGHLIGHTS WITH YOU!
OR MY BROTHER GOT MARRIED LAST WEEK !
OR MY FISHY TURNED BLUE AND HAD TO
GIVE HIM RESUSATION!
HMMMMM! I MEAN COME ON GUYS GET IT
TOGETHER! I MAKE AN EFFORT SO CAN YOU!
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NEWS FLASH! NEWS FLASH!
FOR ALL THOSE THAT HAVENT HEARD!THERES NEW
AVATARS N GIFTS IN THE GIFTSHOP!
YOU WANT TO BE KWL ON HLOUNGE????????????
JOIN THE FISHYS UNITED CLUB!!!!
YEP WE CURRENTLY HAVE 12 NEW FISHY
UNITED CLUB MEMBERS THIS WEEK! WELCOME ALL!
ALSO ! ""NEWS FLASH""
FISHY AND PUPPY CHOW NOW AVAILABLE FROM
HLOUNGE GIFTSHOP!
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redman
Joined: May 12, 2006 Posts: 31
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Posted: Friday July 14th, 2006 5:16 am Post subject: jus for that woman... |
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Babe I Luv U soo much that i cant Xpress it..
Im-a-Giv Luv 2 U thats more dan Impressiv..
Treat U specially N ma Cares Intensiv..
Put ur trust on me coz u da only one i'd b Next-Wid..
Now i ent bein a playa or ent gona b Flexin..
jus 4 dat woman, id climb dat highest mountain..
jus 4 dat woman, id giv my shoulder 4 her to cry-in..
jus 4 dat woman, id bring da whole earth 4 u..
n only jus 4 dat woma-a-an, id save all my love 4 u-ooo..
Cant express my feelings but 4 ur love im goin crazy..
I want u by my side, will u be my baby..
If i have ur love, gurl il rock ur world..
Babe i jus cant get enough, i wana hold u in my arms gurl..
jus 4 dat woman, id climb dat highest mountain..
jus 4 dat woman, id giv my shoulder 4 her to cry-in..
jus 4 dat woman, id bring da whole earth 4 u..
n only jus 4 dat woma-a-an, id save all my love 4 u-ooo..
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VWORLDS
Joined: April 14, 2006 Posts: 324
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Posted: Friday July 14th, 2006 2:52 pm Post subject: |
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THIS IS REALLY KWL REDMAN A GREAT LYRIC FOR A SONG!!!!!!
LOVE IT! |
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temper
Joined: July 14, 2006 Posts: 8
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Posted: Saturday July 15th, 2006 4:17 pm Post subject: |
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i wrote this the other night in bed.. its what i think of death n what happends when u die..
i'll see you when i get there i dont no when im gonna go
but i'll be sure to meet you right there at the crossroads
this is about me and what i think of death
n what i think happens when you aint got nothin left
when you've took your last breath and you cant breathe no more
when you at the crossroads i'll meet you there for sure
none of your gonna leave without me well at least right now i hope
coz ya'll no without you i couldn't really cope
i dont miss a lot of people i dont live a gangster life
im just the kind of person that dont like to think twice
people used to say i got to add mulits and more complex rimes
but they didnt no what was happenin to me that time
i might be hell bound but i dont really want to die
but when i do i dont want none of ya'll to cry
yeah im only 16 but you dont no what could happen
yeah im only 16 and yeah im only rappin
spittin on the mic a lot of people dont feel it
and if ive got a problem then ima try my best to deal with it
i not quitin no time soon im gonna move loads
but when i go im gonna be waitin at the crossroads
time is through
what can i do
the crossroads are callin
ive finished fallin
the crossroads are callin
im about to go
ill see ya'll there at the crossroads
time is through
what can i do
the crossroads are callin
ive finished fallin
the crossroads are callin
im about to go
ill see ya'll there at the crossroads, crossroads, crossroads
life gets cut short by all the shit that you can do
take life one step at a time no matter what it hands you
people can demand and thoughts run through your head
and what you gonna be thinkin when your layin on your death bed
everythin has been said were you gonna go now
the fat ladys sang and your about to take your final bow
the infamous crossroads are callin your name
the grave stones ready and you got your face fittin in a frame
you won the game, you won the game, you won
and right now you no your not goin to soon
but were you gonna go from now, were you gonna go
your hopin deep down in your heart your gonna go home
you cant take no-one with you, you'll meet the one you love
maybe not right now but before you go above
whats gonna happen when your ready who nos
but you no ima be waiting right there at the crossroads
time is through
what can i do
the crossroads are callin
ive finished fallin
the crossroads are callin
im about to go
ill see ya'll there at the crossroads
time is through
what can i do
the crossroads are callin
ive finished fallin
the crossroads are callin
im about to go
ill see ya'll there at the crossroads, crossroads, crossroads
time is through what am i supposed to do
i cant get through to you that i just wanna shoot
up to the crossroads and never come back
drink real holy water and pat god on the back
good work man ill see you when i get there
live life as a free soul with no little care
with no worries and we're livin to die
so ya'll better make peace before i say goodbye
these are only lyrics comin outta my mouth all the time
my thoughts, my life, my anger, my rimes
do you really care coz i dont think you do
but that aint my problem its just up to you
and what you think coz this is my life
and its only me and there aint no device
coz this aint what it seems and ill see you when i go
you better believe that ima be at them crossroads
time is through
what can i do
the crossroads are callin
ive finished fallin
the crossroads are callin
im about to go
ill see ya'll there at the crossroads
time is through
what can i do
the crossroads are callin
ive finished fallin
the crossroads are callin
im about to go
ill see ya'll there at the crossroads, crossroads, crossroads
time is through
what can i do
the crossroads are callin
ive finished fallin
the crossroads are callin
im about to go
ill see ya'll there at the crossroads
time is through
what can i do
the crossroads are callin
ive finished fallin
the crossroads are callin
im about to go
ill see ya'll there at the crossroads, crossroads, crossroads |
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VWORLDS
Joined: April 14, 2006 Posts: 324
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Posted: Sunday July 16th, 2006 12:07 am Post subject: |
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WOW THIS IS DEEP MAN !AND LOVED THE BIT ABOUT PAT GOD ON THE BACK VERY ORIGINAL THOUGHTS! THANKYOU FOR ADDING THIS FOR US TO READ I ENJOYED READING IT! |
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redman
Joined: May 12, 2006 Posts: 31
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Posted: Sunday July 16th, 2006 8:09 am Post subject: |
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brilliant
temper wrote: | i wrote this the other night in bed.. its what i think of death n what happends when u die..
i'll see you when i get there i dont no when im gonna go
but i'll be sure to meet you right there at the crossroads
this is about me and what i think of death
n what i think happens when you aint got nothin left
when you've took your last breath and you cant breathe no more
when you at the crossroads i'll meet you there for sure
none of your gonna leave without me well at least right now i hope
coz ya'll no without you i couldn't really cope
i dont miss a lot of people i dont live a gangster life
im just the kind of person that dont like to think twice
people used to say i got to add mulits and more complex rimes
but they didnt no what was happenin to me that time
i might be hell bound but i dont really want to die
but when i do i dont want none of ya'll to cry
yeah im only 16 but you dont no what could happen
yeah im only 16 and yeah im only rappin
spittin on the mic a lot of people dont feel it
and if ive got a problem then ima try my best to deal with it
i not quitin no time soon im gonna move loads
but when i go im gonna be waitin at the crossroads
time is through
what can i do
the crossroads are callin
ive finished fallin
the crossroads are callin
im about to go
ill see ya'll there at the crossroads
time is through
what can i do
the crossroads are callin
ive finished fallin
the crossroads are callin
im about to go
ill see ya'll there at the crossroads, crossroads, crossroads
life gets cut short by all the shit that you can do
take life one step at a time no matter what it hands you
people can demand and thoughts run through your head
and what you gonna be thinkin when your layin on your death bed
everythin has been said were you gonna go now
the fat ladys sang and your about to take your final bow
the infamous crossroads are callin your name
the grave stones ready and you got your face fittin in a frame
you won the game, you won the game, you won
and right now you no your not goin to soon
but were you gonna go from now, were you gonna go
your hopin deep down in your heart your gonna go home
you cant take no-one with you, you'll meet the one you love
maybe not right now but before you go above
whats gonna happen when your ready who nos
but you no ima be waiting right there at the crossroads
time is through
what can i do
the crossroads are callin
ive finished fallin
the crossroads are callin
im about to go
ill see ya'll there at the crossroads
time is through
what can i do
the crossroads are callin
ive finished fallin
the crossroads are callin
im about to go
ill see ya'll there at the crossroads, crossroads, crossroads
time is through what am i supposed to do
i cant get through to you that i just wanna shoot
up to the crossroads and never come back
drink real holy water and pat god on the back
good work man ill see you when i get there
live life as a free soul with no little care
with no worries and we're livin to die
so ya'll better make peace before i say goodbye
these are only lyrics comin outta my mouth all the time
my thoughts, my life, my anger, my rimes
do you really care coz i dont think you do
but that aint my problem its just up to you
and what you think coz this is my life
and its only me and there aint no device
coz this aint what it seems and ill see you when i go
you better believe that ima be at them crossroads
time is through
what can i do
the crossroads are callin
ive finished fallin
the crossroads are callin
im about to go
ill see ya'll there at the crossroads
time is through
what can i do
the crossroads are callin
ive finished fallin
the crossroads are callin
im about to go
ill see ya'll there at the crossroads, crossroads, crossroads
time is through
what can i do
the crossroads are callin
ive finished fallin
the crossroads are callin
im about to go
ill see ya'll there at the crossroads
time is through
what can i do
the crossroads are callin
ive finished fallin
the crossroads are callin
im about to go
ill see ya'll there at the crossroads, crossroads, crossroads |
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temper
Joined: July 14, 2006 Posts: 8
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Posted: Sunday July 16th, 2006 10:09 am Post subject: |
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cheers guys i'll post some more up when i get round to typin em up |
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